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serenity blaze
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0 posted 05-23-2001 03:38 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

There is nothing I could do
there is not a thing I'd choose
no one I would rather be--
I want you to want me--for ME.

I wish we could wish us alone.
Sand angels--I am on my own.
No impression made too deep.
each grain to fall, memory's keep.

In the beauty of a glass,
how we wish for time to pass!
As we watch our lives in spill--
then wish that we had time to kill.

Each thought of you, a castle spilt--
every wave, in pave of silt.

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 05-23-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 05-23-2001 05:33 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

each grain to fall, memory's keep
.....

Extraordinary....

Regards O Serene One,
Sudhir
Janet Marie
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2 posted 05-23-2001 08:34 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

No impression made too deep.
each grain to fall, memory's keep.

In the beauty of a glass,
how we wish for time to pass!
As we watch our lives in spill--
then wish that we had time to kill.

Each thought of you, a castle spilt--
every wave, in pave of silt.
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what you do with metaphor, rhyme and the emotions of your heart and soul never cease  to blow me away...
No wonder me muse splits...  

We wish ourselves beautiful,
we cry in the night.
Its not the love you fear ...
its the fall from the height.
~Edwin McCain~

angelbear
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3 posted 05-23-2001 09:32 AM       View Profile for angelbear   Email angelbear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelbear

"In the beauty of a glass,
how we wish for time to pass!"

This a great line. I am new here but just wanted to say I enjoyed this greatly.

Until you are are near it, you will never see it, until you live it you will never know it...this is why we must not judge it.

brian madden
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4 posted 05-23-2001 04:01 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

In the beauty of a glass,
how we wish for time to pass!
As we watch our lives in spill--
then wish that we had time to kill.

Each thought of you, a castle spilt--
every wave, in pave of silt.
=============================

You never fail to Amaze.

"across the unfair divide
where black will never meet white
so read my token lips
like they never exist"

nicky wire

Irish Rose
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5 posted 05-23-2001 06:54 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Ok, I really liked this, I mean really!"

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Sven
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6 posted 05-23-2001 07:20 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

ah yes. . . written in the sands of life and love. . .

wonderful serenity. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irish Rose
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7 posted 05-24-2001 11:00 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

I just had to read this again, I really liked this so much
Saunni
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8 posted 05-24-2001 11:36 PM       View Profile for Saunni   Email Saunni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saunni

Awww, I really liked this also. I enjoyed this one!  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Masked Intruder
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9 posted 05-25-2001 03:37 AM       View Profile for Masked Intruder   Email Masked Intruder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Masked Intruder

Angel, most definitely, but methinks that if you are a sand angel, then I shall certainly miss your company with each high tide that sweeps along the sandy shores, and truly shall wait upon the rocks as the moon pulls its unceasing tricks to hear your angelic voice.

You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb

ethome
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10 posted 05-25-2001 06:13 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Very interesting approach Celeste.......

" I wish we could wish us alone.
Sand angels--I am on my own."

There's a lot of passion in this loneliness....well done!
passing shadows
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11 posted 05-21-2004 01:28 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

*sigh*
 
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