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IceNeyes
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0 posted 2001-05-23 01:34 AM


Quite the easiest
question fielded
this day

the essence exists
only so long
as the integrity

of the soul
whose form it
manifests

no shorter
no longer
a simple equation indeed



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1 posted 2001-05-23 09:19 AM


You've answered a question of the soul, then....

no question sought
is fraught with less
than wisdom's bless
should the request
be to one
who would share
all

Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2001-05-23 01:24 PM


Love it IceNeyes.

Titia

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3 posted 2001-05-23 08:27 PM


e=i s (superscript s)

where e is the essence, and i is the integrity and s is the power of the soul. . .

well written. . . an original idea. . .  

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brian madden
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4 posted 2001-05-31 02:10 PM


heh you guys don't get all mathematical on me keep it on poetic terms. looks like you have a sound theory there

"difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true
Brutal and mocking but always therea crutch for enmity's saddest glare"

Watersign6
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5 posted 2001-05-31 03:57 PM


this one reminds me of one i wrote with a similar style to it i will have to find mine an post it sometime,enjoyed yours very much

SilentSongs
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6 posted 2001-05-31 04:38 PM


Human equations, given our propensity to illogical attitudes and actions one might think the term a misnomer.

Yet it seems a very valid point. And I, not yet at least can find no departure from logic, nor even intuition. I wonder if I will. For music is mathematics, but equally emotive, but could not exist without the logic of those mathematics. Hmmm now you have me pondering out loud.

Obviously an interesting read.
And one that puzzles me.

"The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance."

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7 posted 2001-05-31 09:49 PM


Questions....a why
essence....of life
souls....manifest
living

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8 posted 2001-06-01 01:31 PM


Integrity of the soul.  
What a fine thought to ponder.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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