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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-05-22 06:53 PM



You are the fire in my heart.
You keep me warm on my cold nights.
You are the candle that lights my path.
In your arms you hold my passion.
My inhibitions you release.
You believe in me,
molding me to you,
the way love should.


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Mother_Earth
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1 posted 2001-05-22 07:26 PM


walker, this is great!  This must be a perfect love.  Hang on to it!  Not much of that around.   ME
Watersign6
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2 posted 2001-06-05 01:39 PM


Walker your such a poet of love and thats
so beautiful  

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3 posted 2001-06-05 01:55 PM


(sigh) Once again your heavenly words of love flood this forum in such a silky and tender way! (smiles) You truly are in love and I am so happy to see it! (smiles) Yes, being faithful to a lover is the way true love should always be, and sadly there is so much lack of that in this world today, but you are one of the beautiful people in this world who holds true love close in heart. (smiles) May this true love forever flourish in you! (smiles) Write on, sweet romeo! (smiles) You have such a bautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-06-05 01:57 PM


Love is 1derful and so are your thoughts.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


Poeminister
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5 posted 2001-06-05 03:28 PM


Most definitly.  Nicely said.

Poeminister

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