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Fireside Delight
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Fireside Delight |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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The grandfather clock ticks behind us As the rain falls so heavily outside It's in the front of the roaring fire Where you and I now reside Like a log that burns brightly in the fire So does my love burn for you As we sit cosily in front of the fire There's so much in this warmth we could do Our bodies glow in profile from the firelight You put my hair back behind my ears Then you tenderly put your arms around me And draw my body towards you so near The wine is the color of rubies In the crystal glass I hold in my hand As you reach down and take my hand in yours And together as one we both stand You take my face in your hands and you kiss me I suddenly feel so very weak at the knees Our passisons without a match are ignited As we are both so eager to please Our bare feet sink seductively into the sheepskin The place where our love will succumb This is the place where our bodies will join And we two will so soon become one Suetang |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow, I enjoyed this poem very much. Your descriptions made the poem very realistic.  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
lot of passion in this one! Kathleen Blake |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I hope you felt the warmth from the fire..Sue Suetang |
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LAA Junior Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 11 |
Every lover's hopes and dreams, nicely penned! LAA |
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