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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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With enthusiasm, not expertise I'll try my very best to please. So guide my actions with your moans and sighs; Tell just what touches tantalize. Let me tease and taste, inhale and savor - You'll be doing me a favor! Hmmm... Will you groan for more if I do this? Close your eyes, surrender to bliss, Go ahead, lose your breath in sheer delight, We'll have a long and loving night. And when all coherent thought flees your brain I'll kiss you softly, start again. So never doubt as you cry out my name Tomorrow brings more of the same. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Breakout the ice, it got real hot in here  Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wow...I need to take lessons from you...  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
WOW....this sizzles!!! helen |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
nothing like a little repetition in lovemaking! Kathleen Blake |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
more of the same tomorrow??? wow!! LOL Love this one suthern. . . it speaks very well. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Your such a tease. But in case your not put me on the top of the list. *L* Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Close your eyes, surrender to bliss, Go ahead, lose your breath in sheer delight, We'll have a long and loving night. And when all coherent thought flees your brain I'll kiss you softly, start again. So never doubt as you cry out my name Tomorrow brings more of the same. ========================= OH BABY.... UMMMMM Ruthie???? Did you get into me raspberry tea??? ROFL Oh..I know...ya ate too much cajun food this weekend when ya went to Lou ...LOL whatever the cause...Im digging the slooooow burn. (better be careful... someone will think ya are a moth)  *wink* hehefeed that randy dragon  We wish ourselves beautiful, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGAL~  This is plain downright hotsy totsy ~  After a couple more 'tomorrows' ... you'll have that 'expertise' down to a fine art ! Ya' just gotta LOVE SEYMOUR's reply ! ! *BIG SMILES* Go Gal Go ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Ahh..yes..tastefully done, suthern. I like it. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WOW... regards to you, Suthern, Sudhir |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I noticed some kisses in there...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Interloper: Will that be block, cubed, crushed, or shaved? *G* Thank you for reading! nakdthoughts: Unless you LIKE getting an RSVP of "No, thanks!" ya might wanta rethink taking lessons from me. LOL. Thank you! 1slick_lady: Thank you very much. Your WOW is appreciated! *S* Irish Rose: Practice makes perfect? *EG* Thank you! Sven: Well... at least I can dream! *G* Thank you very much! Seymour: You sweetheart... you're already so near the top of the list you'd better lace up your running shoes! LOL. Thank you! *S* Janet Marie: Hey... a gal can wish even with regular ole ordinary tea. *G* Not to worry, though... no one's gonna mistake me for having wings. *S* Thank you... glad you dig! *G* Marge: Not a chance, dang it! *G* For this gal, tomorrow never comes! LOL. I do love Seymour's reply... and your smiles. *S* Thank you! Temptress: And blatant? LOL. Thank you very much. Sudhir: Thank you very much for your WOW! *S* James Michael: Yup. *S* Thank you for reading! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I know I gots a lopsided grin (my tooth is acting up again) but gosh this made me smile, wish I had some inspiration to write one of these....really nice write lady |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Now that's what I call real southern hospitality. A double serving with molasses on top. Liz |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
jellybeans: Pssssssssssssssstttttt... it's called imagination! LOL I'm glad it gave you a smile, dear friend... thank you! Elizabeth: Now if only I could find someone who likes sweets, I'd gladly be his suthern comfort! LOL. Thank you very much for reading! *S* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Imagination....extraordinaire! |
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