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The Sky is Happy

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Mabel A. Dilley
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morning stands quietly
radiant reflections please
the sky is happy

"I am not now that which I have been."

© Copyright 2001 Mabel A. Dilley - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-22-2001 01:55 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Very good Haiku.  Might want to shorten first line a tad.  More!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

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Titia Geertman
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Yes indeed, suggestion: remove the 'ly' from quietly, then it would be correct.

Like it though, nice picture too

Titia
Mabel A. Dilley
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Darn!! And I thought I had counted better than that. Thanks for catching that.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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4 posted 05-22-2001 03:54 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Well, I for one believe the sky does have emotion, it certainly seems angry during a thunderstorm!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Nate Dogg
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Wow, this is so beautiful....great work!!

Nathan

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that's why I count the syllables. . . lol. . . it's the only way that I can be sure that I don't miss one. . .  

great job Julian. . .

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gorgeous!
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8 posted 11-17-2005 02:19 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mabel~

Wishing for return
Of poetic lines of you
Come on, make my day~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -   noles1@totcon.com   

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