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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2001-05-22 06:28 AM


I reach out to you longing,
In my pain,
To touch your warmth belonging.

I grasp for more than just air,
For my pain,
Soothing thoughts to show you care.

Only the pain screams being,
Only pain,
All emotions are fleeing.

Gloom


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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2001-05-22 06:30 AM


short and sweet, nice rhyme scheme, sad theme...I like it
suthern
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2 posted 2001-05-22 04:19 PM


Ouch! *S* I understand this all too well! *S* Great poem!
Suetang
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3 posted 2001-05-22 06:14 PM


Beautifully written.......Sue

Suetang

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-05-22 06:48 PM


very painful write  

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression
5 posted 2001-05-22 08:29 PM


Thank you, Passing Shadows
I am glad my sadly crafted words
Appealed to you and please you a bit.

Thank you, suthern
Understanding and memories aren’t always pain free,
Glad you liked the poem.

Thank you, Suetang,
Your words are very kind.

Thank you, Irish Rose,
Pain is one of the stronger emotions

Gloom

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