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S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2001-05-22 02:01 AM


Even Deeper


come, Dive Deeply
into me
as deep as you can

Even Deeper

Swim to my Soul
it’s there
I know it is

Find it
curl up around it
hug it
Whisper Secrets there
I long to hear

my Heart will resonate
with your Sweet Voice

tell me Who you are
tell me Who I am
              
                
              
© S Arthur Grey
05.21.01

© Copyright 2001 S Arthur Grey - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-05-22 06:17 AM


~whispering~~~~very nice *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2001-05-22 06:28 AM


makes one think of skinny dipping  
Lady In White
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3 posted 2001-05-22 04:33 PM


This likes me very much.....very much, indeed....
Titia Geertman
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Netherlands
4 posted 2001-05-22 04:59 PM


I think this is a beautiful poem

Titia

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
5 posted 2001-05-22 05:20 PM


s arthur...this is strong...intense...& you...are a special rare soul...helen
S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19
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woven by a poet's loom
6 posted 2001-06-13 08:56 PM


Wynter, passing shadows, Lady in White, Titia, 1:

Oh, this one got away!
Sorry for not responding.
(I'll blame it on my dead computer, ok?)
Thanks each of you for reading.
Longing is made richer with poetry, I think.  It works for me.

S Arthur

. . . Hills jump with brooks.
trees tumble out of twigs and sticks;
e e cummings

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