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Open Poetry #14

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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-05-22 01:32 AM

The life of a tree ends methodically
It calculates its time above the ground

Growing evermore leaves
Till no more fall

Reaching the descend,
From the ground it was brought forth.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-05-22 06:18 AM

hmm...very thoughtful today..enjoyed

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-05-22 08:12 AM

I like this, speaks much with few words.
Sandra

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

3 posted 2001-05-31 02:02 PM

Reaching the descend,
From the ground it was brought forth.

Really loved the last line, nice piece.

"difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true
Brutal and mocking but always therea crutch for enmity's saddest glare"

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

4 posted 2001-05-31 03:13 PM

Very nice!

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

5 posted 2001-05-31 03:46 PM

bravo! how wonderful

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

6 posted 2001-05-31 11:37 PM

I thank each and everyone of you for taking the time in reading my poem and responding to it.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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