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Marge Tindal
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Waltzing Luna

~*Marge Tindal*~

~*~
Moonlight glows
soft serenade - across
indigo sky is laid - stairway
to Allegheny moon - lovers step
Luna's tune - lilting of poetic song
Gentle moon does bring along - just
one gentle dance of wonder - waltz
of an evening lightly wanders- upon
such adoring thoughts as these
moonbeams sway in gentle
breeze - come sweet
dance with me
~*~


~ Allegheny Moon ~
Sequenced by Margi Harrell www.smickandsmodoo.com


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 05-22-2001 12:04 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I love the format here Marge...it sits so nicely on the page...was it hard to do? I can never do formatted works like this...

K
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2 posted 05-22-2001 12:08 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kamla~
Little slice of green cheese !
Piece of cake ... falls easily to the page for me.
That's me 'prissy' coming out to play !
Thanks for stopping by !
*Hugs*
~*Marge(y)*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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wonderful images, as i have come to expect from you.... the form is interesting too, kind of an inverse teardrop.... was that intentional? and if so (i'm kinda dense) what was it meant to suggest?
-Napalm


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NCC~
Kinda ?  LOL !  

Shucks, I just write 'em ...
You expect ME to explain 'em ?  

Que Sera, Sera ~
Open to perceptive interpretation, my friend.
Glad you enjoyed ...

Hey ... I like that 'inverse' ...
that's what we poets do well ! !
THANKS !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Okay I have had my laugh for tonight that's for sure, and I will just go out under an alligaty (sp?) moon and howl now...that was a fun thing, thank you Marge.

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~
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Mysteria~
Hey !
This waltz is no laughing matter ! !
Whatever has gotten into you ?
Were ya' struck on the head by a falling moonbeam ? ?  
Oh ... forgot, that was ME that took the 'bonk' !
LOL !  Good to see your laughter, my friend !

*Hugs*
~*LoonyLunaLady*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 05-22-2001 11:27 AM       View Profile for Soaringeagle   Email Soaringeagle   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Soaringeagle

  OH DEAR MAIDEN
ANOTHER MASTERPIECE
WHAT CLASS

PLEASE SAVE THE LAST DANCE FOR ME<>    
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Oh, this is Majestic...

Regards to you Marge,
Sudhir
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I've said it before and I will say it again...
I do so love when Margie moons us    
another beauty from your luna muse girliegirl.
you shine divine  

We wish ourselves beautiful,
we cry in the night.
Its not the love you fear ...
its the fall from the height.
~Edwin McCain~

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Margie girl, whenever I see the moon full I always hear myself say that's Margie's moon. An outstanding and magnificent piece from you.

I really love you sister mine, you lift me up when I'm having difficulty standing up straight. Thank you muchly
Take care love and warm stuff
                    Mushy
                      

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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11 posted 05-22-2001 01:18 PM       View Profile for lunatic   Email lunatic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lunatic

Allegheny Moon
beautiful song about me
and how my light shines

Moonlight Serenade
is that much more beautiful
and speaks to my heart

and wonderful waltz
music of Man-In-The-Moon
truly conjures love

Moonstruck

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~*~
Sweet
Soaring Eagle~
Grandma always said
"Gotta dance the last
dance with the fellow
what brung you -so
that definitely
is YOU~
~*~

~*~
Sudhir~
Ah, a bit of
inspire lingering in
that majestic moon
Spilling her glow
just for you
~*~

~*~
JanetMarie~
Just a little bit of
mooning - phases of
delightful afterglow
Shining from the
heart of me
~*~

~*~
MarshaLove~
May your eyes see
~*MargieMoon*~ shining
covering you in the softest
glow of moonbeamed wishes
Sweetly lighting your way
into the evening with one
whose love quietly sets
your loving heart
all aglow
~*~

~*~
LunaTic~
Perfect penning
for your poeticized reply
How's about just a little bit of
two-moon, true-moon compromise
in honor of the glow of 'she-moon'
waltzing dreamily with the he-moon
Loveliest Luna would love to dance
across the indigo midnight sky
upon radiant beams of your
light in shining moments
of passionate sigh
~*~

WHAT FUN !  
Thanks to all of you for enjoying the glow !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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beautiful
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