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Poeminister
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0 posted 2001-05-21 08:51 PM



  


Pensive butterfly
perches herself upon pink
dreams start to stint thought



[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 05-23-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-05-21 09:14 PM


It is wonderful to see these lovely, descriptive lines become so popular....
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2 posted 2001-05-21 09:19 PM


Hey Poe--good to see you back--have missed your thoughtful verse--and how you convey so much with so few words never ceases to amaze me. So delicate...lovely!
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3 posted 2001-05-21 11:12 PM


lovely thought, gentle words here..

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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4 posted 2001-05-21 11:54 PM


PoeMinister~
This is STUNNING !
The graphic is 'almost' as lovely as your thoughts !

*Check your e-mail.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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this is wonderful  
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6 posted 2001-05-22 01:28 PM


thoughtful butterfly
lands beside the pensive one
sharing dreams of love

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Mabel A. Dilley
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7 posted 2001-05-22 01:48 PM


haiku is a favorite of mine and this is lovely.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Poeminister
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8 posted 2001-05-23 02:05 PM


Thank you all for you replies unto this poem.

take care,
Poeminister


[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 05-23-2001).]

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