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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-05-21 08:07 PM



We come together,
in this love.
We find ourselves,
face to face kissing,
nothing more pleasing than you and I teasing.
Two hearts beating in one soul.
Playing with each other,
chest to chest.
Materializing this love,
as we make love.
Guiding our bodies in one dimensional passion.
While exploding together in this genesis of love.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Poeminister
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1 posted 2001-05-21 08:12 PM


Beautiful!
Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2001-05-21 09:28 PM


Wow Walker, how lovely

Titia

Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2001-05-21 10:02 PM


Very hot write, walker.  Romantic and beautiful.  

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Mother_Earth
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4 posted 2001-05-21 10:05 PM


walker, walker, walker.  Boy, is that a picture!  Lots of feelings.  Great.  ME
Suetang
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5 posted 2001-05-21 10:21 PM


I thought this was so very beautiful....Sue

Suetang

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-05-21 11:15 PM


Walker~
VERY nicely done ...
and I'm sure 'someone' agrees.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JLR
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7 posted 2001-05-22 12:29 PM


Materialize this love....incredible way to say it.  Loved this one!
Watersign6
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8 posted 2001-06-05 01:30 PM


oh how i do love this one Walker  
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9 posted 2001-06-05 01:35 PM


(sigh) Soooooo beautiful! Your poems are always filled with such passionate and tender love from a heart that is filled with it! There is definitely nothing more pleasing than this feeling! This poem made me wish I was making this kind of love! (smiles) You've come together with your dream, and may you forever stay together eternally! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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