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If I Should Die
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If I Should Die |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
If I should die tomorrow I'd count my life complete For having known the wonder of your love Though we have yet to meet. If I should leave this earthly life The only thing I would miss Is never having known The pleasure of your kiss. But I dont intend on leaving 'Til I've looked into your eyes And whispered all these words of love That I hold deep inside. God wouldnt be so cruel As to take my life, you see Before I've had the chance To hold you close to me. So I go on counting days Yes, hours and minutes too They bring me ever closer To sharing my life with you. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Paula--Beautiful affections expressed in these words. Wonderful write. Poeminister "The soul can split the sky in two, And let the face of God shine through." ~Millay |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Wow this is good. I sure hope God reads it and sees that you still have some living and loving to do before you die. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Amen. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Paula...Indeed. Nicely done. Bob |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Meet him, meet him!!!! call 1-800-Delta!!!! Kathleen Blake |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula my dearest sister, as always you write with absolute beauty. I love this you know I do, and no love HE isn't cruel HE is love, and understanding it so well HE encourages it to grow and prosper. Put your faith in Love and it will be all you deserve. Don't I always say you deserve the best love, and you will get it truly. love and warm stuff Take care of you love Mushy  YOU are a writer and a teacher my sweet sister, you've taught me loads, love and hope, and to never give up. Thank you Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Paula indeed this is beautiful verse...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
paula, God isn't cruel...nice poem though |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Each minute believe that you'll live forever- see- so far, so good. Wonderfully written piece. I enjoyed it. Melton |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Wow, sure hope so for you Titia |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Poeminister...thank you very much... inot2B...yes me too...thanks interloper...amen yes it is a bit of a plea isnt it? thanks RMW...Thanks my friend Kathleen...plans are in the works dearheart...its just taking a little time Oh my sweet sis Marsha...how you flatter me girl...if I have taught you anything its only because you listen with that loving heart of yours... James my bestest friend...hugs and thanks passing shadows...I know God isnt cruel...thank you Melton...I try my friend...to live each moment as if its my last...I sometimes get myself in trouble that way...but I sure livewith fewer regrets than most people I know walker...thank you Titia...thats sweet to say thank you |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Now that's true love....very nice write! Nathan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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