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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2001-05-21 02:30 PM



This is but a fairy breeze
drifting bout
my window sill

A inner longing
whispering beyond
the noise that surrounds

Sacred calling
to higher plane
rising from mediocrity's
dismal space

Oh if only  to join
old Puck
hence be bathed in woodland magic
on this  summer's  eve

Sadly chained by feeble mortality
I stare at the taunting stars
and dream
of things beyond my thoughts

falling to sleep
to the singing of elves
before reality's wind
blows away fairy breeze
just beyond my window sill


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1 posted 2001-05-21 02:30 PM


Well done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Brad Majors
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2 posted 2001-05-21 02:52 PM


thank you!
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3 posted 2001-05-21 03:02 PM


Excellent.  I know the feeling.  Nicely expressed.

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4 posted 2001-05-21 03:32 PM


I enjoyed the "elves" the whole piece spoke to me!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
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Brad Majors
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5 posted 2001-05-21 03:52 PM


thank you for reading!
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6 posted 2001-05-21 06:58 PM


good to see one of yours here, now I must look for some more.  enjoyed the read, love that fairy breeze of a morn or eve wafting in the window, tickling the skin
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7 posted 2001-05-22 07:37 AM


BradMajors~

'I stare at the taunting stars
and dream
of things beyond my thoughts'


I like this vision of dreams ~
~*Marge*~

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8 posted 2001-05-22 02:29 PM


Thank you! Does anyone know the play I'm alluding to?  
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