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Open Poetry #14

Sunshine Equals Moonlight

lunatic
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 172

0 posted 2001-05-21 12:13 PM

Sun
And
Moon
Two orbs
One dominant
Sunshine
Causes
Moonlight
You are the
Sunshine
Of my life
Your love
Causes my
Moonglow
And
The man in the moon
Smiles
Thankfully
Knowlingly
Gratefully
Lovingly

Moonstruck

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-05-21 12:17 PM

Whomever this is meant for is surely smiling at the Man in the Moon....

well done!

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-05-21 12:20 PM

Perfect metaphors, very loving. Nicely expressed.

Poeminister

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-05-21 10:19 PM

LunaTic~
Oh ... so artfully said.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

lunatic
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 172

4 posted 2001-05-22 12:16 PM

Decaflame - I certainly hope so.

Poeminister - Perfect? Many thanks!

Marge - You flatterer,you

Moonstruck

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