Silliness - rhyming Senryu string, almost

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Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-05-21 10:35 AM

my muse has no purse
that itself is such a curse
I fight for each verse

now you know the truth
I fight for verse nail and tooth
hang me with a nooth

now you see how hard
I attempt to be a bard
I win no award

my muse is you see
composed of you all and me
simple isn't it

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2001-05-21 10:36 AM

nice, nice

regards,
sudhir

RMW
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2 posted 2001-05-21 10:50 AM

Interloper....smiling....sweet, as the tooth fairy, and simple. I love this. Bob

Decaflame
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3 posted 2001-05-21 10:50 AM

ROTF....hang you with a nooth, indeed!

VAS
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Oregon

4 posted 2001-05-21 10:51 AM

your muse is amusing

SEA

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with you

5 posted 2001-05-21 11:49 AM

too cute my dear......too cute

lunatic
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6 posted 2001-05-21 11:57 AM

ha

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Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-05-21 11:58 AM

Sudhir ~ Thanx for the read my friend.

Bob ~ Much appreciated approbation

Decaflame ~ Well, no nooth is good newth

VAS ~ Glad I could make you smile.

SEA ~ Too cute?
You mean, ah, er, I could never get cuter?
Awww ... shux ...

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

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Regina SK; Canada

8 posted 2001-05-21 12:02 PM

Enjoyed these

"life is the Childhood of our immortality"
--Goethe

Irish Rose
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9 posted 2001-05-21 02:09 PM

a lovely read about your muse!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

10 posted 2001-05-21 02:28 PM

Poeminister ~ Thanks for the read.

Colleen ~ Glad you stopped by

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25

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Hurricane,WV

11 posted 2001-06-05 07:38 PM

i enjoy your poeticness very much

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

12 posted 2001-06-06 09:13 AM

Watersign6 ~ I enjoy your commenticness. they are very nice, too

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

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