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A Whisper's Arrest (Senryu)
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A Whisper's Arrest (Senryu) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
A Whisper's Arrest- through my ears, into my breast Softness siezes me |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
well heck...where have you been???? this is a beautiful comeback. don't stay away so long next time. K? May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This one strikes at my spirit tonight..in a softer way. Enjoyed. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely image! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
arresting whispers soft against my ear I hear this love of your near |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
had to read this again, it really is simply lovely. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
whisper's arrest... very cool combination of words here...  |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
I do have a love of these when done well, and yours always are. Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
"A Whisper's Arrest- through my ears, into my breast Softness siezes me" --------------- A whisper arrests with powers unseen a gentleness that touches thee a softness that enchants and a loveliness that would always hold thee --------------- Looooooooved it........ three soft tilting lines that beckon magically Thank you for them ************************ It's only me.......only me I hope that would suffice eternally {{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}} [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 06-11-2001).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yeah, softness seizes me once in awhile too....great write! |
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pres56 Junior Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 28 |
Really nice. |
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