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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-20 07:14 PM

So Deep

I know
of a place
where a house
is a home
and one who stands
behind me
even when
I’ve been wrong
who sees
beyond my faults
and takes me
who I am
where I am
no disappointment
and I know
just where I stand
it is a place
of calm
this place
that I know
where my walls
are broken down
in trust
just how deep
will this go

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2001-05-20 07:58 PM

The thoughts you bring to my mind with this..are amazing. I enjoyed this.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-05-20 07:59 PM

hopefully deeper than you've ever known. . .

thank you for this helen. . . made me think. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-05-20 09:01 PM

OneSlickLady~
Enjoyed these thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

4 posted 2001-05-20 09:11 PM

Helen,

What wonderful place to be in

Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

TaraB

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

5 posted 2001-05-21 01:05 AM

Lady,
A warm, enfolding place, this.
But then the last lines? The uncertainty. The unknown.
You have a talent for finishing, I think.

S Arthur

. . . Hills jump with brooks.
trees tumble out of twigs and sticks;
e e cummings

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-05-21 01:36 AM

Comforting words...nicely penned.

Poeminister

poni
Junior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 21
Nebraska

7 posted 2001-05-21 01:36 AM

what a tribute to a loved one! smiles...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2001-05-21 04:30 AM

oh i wish i knew of this place, but i haven't found it yet...be glad that you know...hold onto it forever.

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

9 posted 2001-05-21 05:33 PM

I've been to a place like this and it was indeed wonderful.
May you never find the true depth.
Enjoyed this one greatly.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-05-21 06:57 PM

this is deep!!!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

11 posted 2001-05-21 07:01 PM

Beautifull, thank you.

Titia

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

12 posted 2001-05-21 10:00 PM

Helen...this is very touching. "..walls are broken down in trust..." Yes. Bob

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

13 posted 2001-05-22 01:10 AM

Hopefully as deeply as you deserve...this flowed!

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

14 posted 2001-05-22 02:30 AM

Yes it is so deep beyound ur imagination

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

15 posted 2001-05-22 05:35 AM

A place of trust and peace.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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