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Open Poetry #14

Tomorrow(repost)

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 2001-05-20 03:44 PM

Tomorrow, a new day starts
as old souls, shall find new hearts.
Tomorrow, the wind will blow
and all the boats, shall row.

Tomorrow, the rivers will flow
and all the flowers, shall grow.
Tomorrow, the birds will fly
and tears, shall fall from my eyes.

Tomorrow, I willl find peace
and all my sadness, shall cease.
Tomorrow, I will pray to Christ,
hopping he'll send me, a ray of light.

Tomorrow, I'll feel God's grace
and have a smile, on my face.
Tomorrow, the sun will shine,
and forever, you'll be mine.

[This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (edited 05-20-2001).]

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2001-05-20 04:09 PM

Very nicely done, Nate! Good to see you again!

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

2 posted 2001-05-20 04:32 PM

Nate Dogg,

I'm glad you reposted this or I would have never had the chance to read it

Wonderfully done.

TaraB

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

3 posted 2001-05-20 07:57 PM

Thank you Denise and rosepetals for your comments!!

Nathan

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

4 posted 2001-06-18 01:22 PM

enjoyed this one nate

glad i got the chance to read it..
very well written..

hugs, g

no i wont be afraid.
no i...wont be afraid,
just as long
as you stand,
stand by me...
-ben e king

DYME
Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 104
Texas

5 posted 2001-06-21 08:50 PM

Sweet!!!!

This is why you are one of my favorite poets.

NO WEAPON FORMED AGAINST ME SHALL PROSPER... ISAIAH 54:17

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

6 posted 2001-06-22 01:00 AM

Thank you DG and Dyme for your sweet comments!!

Nathan

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

7 posted 2001-06-23 06:56 PM

I love the feel of a better tomorrow o yuh!!!

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

8 posted 2001-06-24 01:31 AM

Thank you Way, for your nice comments!~~!

Nathan

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