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VAS
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0 posted 2001-05-20 12:31 PM


Tear
Virginia Salter

tear, tear, riiiiiiiiiip,
rent myself away
how can I do such a thing?
I must, I must, I must move on
yet the severing is painful
Let me go
oh you who are filled with muse
my day is fleeting
you’re extinguishing my fuse
I must go
NOW!

©May 20, 2001

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-20 12:33 PM


....but you'll be back....
VAS
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2 posted 2001-05-20 12:36 PM


oh, yes, yes, yes

it's just that church hour's approaching and I'm still in my....


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3 posted 2001-05-20 05:21 PM


Hmmmmmmmmmmmm.  Don't get that fuse wet  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


VAS
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4 posted 2001-05-20 06:23 PM


interloper, you make some of the most curious remarks...this one and the one to my "Amazing."
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5 posted 2001-05-20 08:24 PM


I see you are back, glad that didn't take too long.  Nice little piece.

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~
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VAS
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6 posted 2001-05-20 09:11 PM


No, I was just alluding to how I needed to get ready for church, since I'd already internetted my way past doing all the things I was going to do BEFORE church.  I was so far from that point I had to force or tear myself away from here to get in on some living.
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7 posted 2001-06-06 11:59 PM


LOL...appreciated that cute little ditty and whole-heartedly agree with your sentiments...
VAS
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8 posted 2001-06-07 12:06 PM


Faterider, I'm certainly glad you're here tonight.  I'm currently nursing/scratching several mosquito bites from gardening in the cool of the evening.  Ouch, itch, oooooh ewwwwwwwwwww
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9 posted 2001-06-07 12:10 PM


ohhh, seems like you have found a poem...do write about that experience...that is, when you have recovered sufficiently...


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10 posted 2001-06-07 01:15 AM


Well...late for work, late for bed, late for dinner.  Can so very relate!
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