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joycerogers
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since 2001-05-16
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0 posted 2001-05-20 12:08 PM



I had so much to do for Him,
But yet, He could not wait.
The dreams, the love, I had for Him,
Could not deter my fate.

My mother, my family, my friends,
Seeped in sorrows.
For they were apart of
All my tomorrows.

How could they comprehend
The depth of His love,
As He watched me drown
From His throne above.

Now I know all things,
Concerning all the whys.
My dreams are being
Fulfilled, before God's very eyes.

This is the reason an
Early death came;
I'm now in His presence,
I'm now being trained.

This is my purpose,
And oh how so great!
Please understand why
He could not wait.


In memory of Antwoyne Edward who drowned last year.  He was only 21.


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Quiet Thunder, rumble
Through my cloud.
Touch my secret parts
Where only you are allowed. - Joyce Rogers

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Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08
Posts 337
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1 posted 2001-05-20 12:16 PM



Lady J
A sweet gift of words
sorrowful, yet so lovingly
shared.

Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
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2 posted 2001-05-20 01:14 PM


Yes, we on earth do not know the whys.
Only will we learn when he takes us home.
Very good.

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-05-20 01:16 PM


I'm very sorry for your loss, this is exquisite.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Denise
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4 posted 2001-05-20 02:37 PM


This is a very comforting piece of writing, Joyce. Very nice.
rosepetals25
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5 posted 2001-05-20 04:43 PM


joyce,

    Beautiful and comforting words for people who lost some one from their lives. I think this one is a keeper... thank you for sharing.

TaraB

passing shadows
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6 posted 2001-05-21 04:35 AM


sadly I know about young people being taken before their time, in tragic ways...but God knows best. It's what you have to believe.
kaile
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7 posted 2001-06-10 11:18 PM


i applaud you for trying to find the silver lining in the cloud and hope that this reply finds you in a better frame of mind....

HUGS

redwriter1
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since 1999-07-22
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8 posted 2001-06-11 07:46 AM


Joyce , how did you get that link on your page that says.... to read other poems, click here.?

VAS
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9 posted 2001-06-11 10:13 AM


lovely, joyce, did you present it to his family, or is it too soon, still?
snowpants
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10 posted 2001-06-12 09:38 PM


Heartfelt expression, joyce...God does have His reasons for everything, however.  It is the one thing to hang on to when everything else makes no sense...thank you for sharing with us...

sp  

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

Lone Wolf
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11 posted 2001-06-12 09:41 PM


Lovely tribute....so sorry for the loss of life....it's always so hard to understand for those who are left behind.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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