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Lady In White
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0 posted 05-20-2001 10:34 AM       View Profile for Lady In White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lady In White

sweet some thoughts snuck in
held me close in early morn
sharing golden smiles

spring’s soft rain still beats
Sunday’s lullaby this morn
freshening my soul

your reign in my heart
swelling fills like soft spring rain
keeping me alive


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Alan
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1 posted 05-20-2001 10:46 AM       View Profile for Alan   Email Alan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alan

this is so soft and sweet. I like the way it is written and what it says...
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2 posted 05-20-2001 11:44 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

"you reign in my heart on a rainy morn.." very nice choice of words, Lady...
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3 posted 05-20-2001 01:19 PM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

Soft spring rain does sound like a sweet lullaby. It's been a long time since we've heard it down where I am.
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Deep in the heart


4 posted 05-20-2001 05:19 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Beautiful, and a powerful play on words.  Exactly what we have come to expect from you.

Well Done!

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5 posted 05-20-2001 05:40 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

How lovely!

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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6 posted 05-20-2001 06:26 PM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste

Lady In White,

This is such a pretty one.  Nothing to critique here, just wish it had been longer.  

Michael

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7 posted 05-20-2001 08:09 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

This felt like a warming of the soul, I loved it!

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8 posted 05-20-2001 08:22 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

water of life. . .

excellent Lady. . .  

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Lady in White,

A refreshing, rejuvinating feeling in these words.  Very nicely penned.

Poeminister  
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sweet some thoughts snuck in
held me close in early morn
sharing golden smiles

I think you have summed up a rainy summer's morning... one word my fellow poet... beautiful very beautiful words.

"across the unfair divide
where black will never meet white
so read my token lips
like they never exist"

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11 posted 05-24-2001 04:25 PM       View Profile for Lady In White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady In White

Alan, sweet and soft is exactly how I meant this to be, thank you...

'Deer, those words hold special meaning, thank you...

inot2b, more of us need a bit of wet...thank you...

Interloper, I will try to continue to uphold all expectations...

Thank you Irish...

Auguste, longer?  Your wish, my command...

Mysteria, what a lovely phrase...

Thank you Sven...

Poeminister, amazing how water can either refresh, or drown...thank you...

Brian, thank you for taking time to read...
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beautiful!
 
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