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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2001-05-19 11:57 PM




Luck

How lucky am I?
To have your precious kind heart
wanting to love me.
Your soul enveloping mine
Your love wrapping me in warmth




TaraB

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 05-20-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-05-20 12:31 PM


This one makes me smile.  It is very nice to see you so happy these days!  Wonderful write.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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2 posted 2001-05-20 12:55 PM


Lone Wolf - Thank you! I am happy again It took some time..and some luck.. but I am I'm glad it made you smile.

TaraB

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3 posted 2001-05-20 01:41 AM


How sweet...how lucky am I to read!
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4 posted 2001-05-20 02:42 AM


JLR - Aww thank you! I'm glad you liked it  

TaraB

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5 posted 2001-05-20 11:10 AM


beautiful way to show your special someone you don't take them for granted!!
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6 posted 2001-05-20 12:01 PM


RosePetals~

Wish on lucky star
Coming true in blink of eye
Bringing smiles to light
Upon your face in content
Wishes are for coming true !


*It IS sheer pleasure to sense your happiness.
Go gal !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2001-05-20 04:24 PM


VAS - There is no worries about that.. I know how lucky I am   Thanks for coming in

Marge -   Thank you Marge! I am much better than I was I'm glad you enjoyed  

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8 posted 2001-05-20 10:31 PM


it's not how lucky YOU are, my dear, it's how lucky _I_ am... but what a beautiful way to tell me you feel the same  
-napalm

PS.... *BUMP*  


I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!
"Why do i smell something burning?!?"
I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!

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9 posted 2001-05-20 10:37 PM


Dave -   Thanks for the bump! hehe And this poem doesn't come close to saying how I feel  
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10 posted 2001-05-21 12:05 PM


Rosepetals--Lovely Tanka.  Nicely done.

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11 posted 2001-05-22 02:46 PM


Nice to read such good thoughts from you again.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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