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Piece of Pie |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
What suites your fancy, day to day And molds your future, anyway Do dreams desire what's not real To bring you down, you broken wheel Look to your soul in pure delight Accept your standing, with no fright Beware! Your piece of pie can't go The day you die, thank God it's so If life holds court on you each day You're nothing but a wretched stray Hold back that tide which tempts your will And reach for heaven, standing still |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Gosh...this is great..and I love that last line..what a line!!! It should be on a bumper sticker. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
pp, I have to agree with deVine, the last line is wonderful! As is the whole poem  TaraB |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
REally like this, and doesn't the world hold court each day on each of us...thank God for His provision of an advocate. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Amen. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very cool piece I love it! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Excellent flow in this. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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