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Slipping Away

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Skyfyre
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Sitting in Michael's Lap


25 posted 05-23-2001 04:48 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

It's amazing how a talented poet can take such a simple assortment of phrases and fashion them into something so profound; nothing about this piece is complicated, and yet it speaks volumes in emotion ...

Though I appreciate this from a poetic standpoint, I sincerely hope that the dark Muse who bled this from you takes her leave sooner rather than later ... hugs hun

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26 posted 05-23-2001 04:55 PM       View Profile for helen smith   Email helen smith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for helen smith

I wanted to say it's those cheesy puffs ...give me a migraine every time, ...but the topic is toooo sensitive ...fabulous poetry    
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


27 posted 05-23-2001 07:27 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Thank you all for your kind remarks. I do appreciate them...and Helen..I can take a joke any time!  
Jamie
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28 posted 05-23-2001 07:38 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

I think this is one of your best ever Sharon,, and that takes some doing. This one definitely goes in the library.

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
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displaced


29 posted 05-21-2004 01:45 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

loved ths one!
 
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