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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-05-19 07:03 PM



peacefully quiet
bodies with glistening sheen
relax together



Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 05-19-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-05-19 07:26 PM


saunas could have been
the mien for sizzling sighs
titled otherwise

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 05-19-2001).]

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with you
2 posted 2001-05-19 09:27 PM


blissful sighs follow
the screams of passion we shared
just moments ago


~SEA

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3 posted 2001-05-20 03:24 AM


smoking cigarette
turning over in the bed
goodnight dear, sleep tight!  

couldn't resist!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~
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IceNeyes
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4 posted 2001-05-20 03:33 AM


There is an after
I did not in truth such know
Love I thought was All

VAS
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5 posted 2001-05-20 11:46 AM


WOW!!!  The ecstasy of the moment is told powerfully in exquisitely few words!
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6 posted 2001-05-20 12:55 PM


Math..After

when All is yet calm
the After love forges one
plus one together

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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7 posted 2001-05-20 04:47 PM


Interloper,

     A wonderfully sensual haiku! I loved it

Interloper
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8 posted 2001-05-20 05:06 PM


Sunshine ~
so, source sizzling sighs
sagatious symbolism
saunas synergize

SEA ~
passionate screaming
turn to sighs of contentment
given tender love

Mysteria ~
smoke your cigarette
but not in my bed, madam
I still breathe to live


IceNeyes ~
I think love is all
we live and die for our loves
we should do no less

VAS ~
Wow is powerful
it expresses all in one
thank you kind lady

Wynter ~
one and one is two
at the least, and could be more
like infinity

Rosepetals25 ~
Thank you for the read
the first time for you I think
your comment adored.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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9 posted 2001-05-20 08:11 PM


This one just has to continue to be read.   Powerfully tender. I enjoyed it.  

Poeminister
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10 posted 2001-05-21 12:39 PM


Interloper--A pleasant image painted with this.  Nicely done.

Poeminister

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11 posted 2001-05-21 08:58 AM


Tempress ~ Thank you for the read and your too kind comment.

Poeminister ~ Thank you very much.  Been a long time since I have heard from you.  Thanx for stopping by  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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12 posted 2001-05-21 11:32 AM


kewl
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13 posted 2001-05-21 04:24 PM


You said it...James
Watersign6
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14 posted 2001-06-05 07:40 PM


WOW! KOOL! Nice Job!  
Interloper
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15 posted 2001-06-06 09:11 AM


BrightStar ~ Thanx  

James ~ Yes, I did, didn't I?  

Watersign6 ~ *sigh*

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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