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Mysteria
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0 posted 2001-05-19 05:40 PM







~*~  Earth ~ Wind ~ Sun ~ Moon ~ Stars  ~*~

The celestial curtains begin to unfurl,
As the darkness of the sky is slowly unveiling,
Beckoning me to enter the secret garden of my mind.
Mind's eye envisions a soft, lush, green canvas,
A painting etched from the palette of the Master.

The earth, wind, fire, moon and stars become alive.
Evening falls, slowly it awakens the magical hours.
I breathe in the day, bathed in memories,
Remembering how I was soothed by Nature's arms.

Drenched in the sensuous curves of life’s landscape.
Safely, Mother Nature held me gently to her trunk.
I watch as feathery, clouds journey to nowhere.
How long have I waited to think these words?
To softly sing the notes of this song?

Pushing back my hair, I feel each gentle breeze.
I hear the soft whispers of rustling leaves.
I remember the warmth of the sun on my skin,
And now chill to the coolness of the moon.

Reflection of the heavens on the sea brings peace.
These are the magical hours with no rhythm or rhyme.
Saturated in the beauty of all creation around me.
The magnitude of all things graced by his touch.

As I awaked in awe that I am but one with creation.
I am the trees, birds, mountains, oceans,
I am the earth, wind, sun, moon, and stars.
I am all colors, and creeds,
One small being in the artist's master plan.

Evening falls and I so slowly awaken,
Feeling the soft caresses of the moon.
Wrapped in calmness, I am at peace with my soul,
At peace with the heavens and the earth.

Art: fantasyrealm.com
Music: Dolphins Dream - Reverie



~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~
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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-05-19 07:37 PM


I see you stretching like a cat after a nap...
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2 posted 2001-05-19 07:39 PM


Soooooo beautiful, Mysteria! Beautifully done!
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3 posted 2001-05-19 07:47 PM


Mysteria~
My goodness !
This is serenity at it's phrasing finest !

What a LOVELY graphic ... I've snatched it for my files !

Lady ... this combo ROCKS !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2001-05-19 08:02 PM


Mysteria
What a wonderful picture you painted with your words and I enjoyed every verse.  Thank you so much.....Sue

Suetang

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5 posted 2001-05-19 08:59 PM


I truly enjoyed both the picture and the verse!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Mysteria
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6 posted 2001-05-20 01:49 AM


Sunshine: He he...I did, I did indeed!

Denise: Thank you so much

Marge: Snatch away!  I am very pleased you liked it, and I did feel serene doing this piece.

Suetang: I imagine this picture of the woman to be "you" in your garden, where it is peaceful and serene.  You are reflecting and creating wonderful poetry I bet!

Irish Rose: You are too kind, and you always like my "combos", thank you.

Kethry
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7 posted 2001-05-20 07:12 AM


Mysteria,
now you have created a desire in me to roll in the grass, or hug a tree, the Goddess dances to this one.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



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8 posted 2001-05-20 09:38 AM


Sharon, this was just incredible!  The picture you have used so perfectly compliments that serene and soothing message of absolute beauty that you have so eloquently painted.  Very enchanting, indeed...I LOVED IT!
((((((((HUGS))))))))))) and smiles to you,
love ya muches, dawn


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9 posted 2001-05-20 02:44 PM


Kethry: Good! and thank you for feeling what I wanted you too.  You live in a beautiful place to go for a walk that is for sure.

Martha: You always say the nicest things, thank you.

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10 posted 2001-06-05 09:04 AM


i have found the archives or at least found out how to get to view an read all poems by
each poet so ive got much reading ahead of me to do an let me just say that you make it
such a joy,i love every line you write  

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11 posted 2001-06-05 07:07 PM


Yanno Watersign your little icon really suits you, I see one happy, little camper running around the archives, books piled high on the tables, reading everything she can get her hands on!  Thank you once again, and I am so happy you like them.

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~

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12 posted 2001-06-06 08:36 AM


what a beauty you've painted here, and I still enjoy the serenity within.
excellent piece my friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

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13 posted 2001-06-06 08:48 AM


Very nicely written..a painting of wrds to relay the feelings... enjoyed
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14 posted 2001-06-06 01:30 PM


Charisma: Glad you liked it!

Cpat Hair: Thank you for reading, and nice to meet you too, as I shall now go find your work to read as a common courtesy, thank you.

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