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0 posted 2001-05-19 04:15 PM




~*~ Kaleidoscope Aria ~*~


Flitter flutters titter,
Above rousing green and lilac.
Freckled with cheerful yellows,
Blazing reds and glorious orange.
While a jovial sun warmed breeze,
Flirts with bustling wings,
Whisking amongst the dew-kissed petals,
From horizon to distant sea.

~*~

photo: ephoto.com, "Fragile Beauty" by Karen Talasco

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~
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Mabel A. Dilley
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1 posted 2001-05-19 04:21 PM


Love your flutter-by. Such a happy poem for this afternoon.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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2 posted 2001-05-19 07:06 PM


I can't spel it or sing it, but you shore wrote it  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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3 posted 2001-05-19 07:24 PM


Well just how GREAT is this, anyway!...Tanfastic!
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4 posted 2001-05-19 07:26 PM



Now you must know that I LOVE it!    Excellent phrasing and imagery!

Take care,
Melissa~

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5 posted 2001-05-20 01:51 AM


Thank you all for liking my nonsense today.  I actually saw this exact picture right outside the window where my computer is.  I have a lilac tree and this little flutterby was catching some rays right before my eyes, much like this one.  The picture here is identical to what I saw from my side window actually.  

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6 posted 2001-05-20 08:44 AM


Mysteria~
Just lovely ~

My mother was of butterfly spirit ~
She often flits about the flowers on my lawn.
Such beauty is meant to be shared ... thank you for doing so.

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2001-05-20 12:20 PM


beautiful composition, in its entirety
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8 posted 2001-05-20 02:47 PM


Marge: Now where I to be a spirit, a butterfly might possibly be my choice, how beautiful she must be?

VAS: Thank you so much for enjoying this.

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9 posted 2001-05-26 02:46 PM


a lovely uplifting poem.

"you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see"  Whipping boy

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10 posted 2001-05-26 03:35 PM


Brian: I do like to "uplift" thank you.
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11 posted 2001-05-27 08:01 AM


aha, i just came across this one of yours i must of missed an want to say it is very enjoyable,everything you write is so beautiful, i hope to have half your talent one day.  
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12 posted 2001-05-27 08:03 AM


Watersign6: I have to tell you - I don't consider myself talented one bit in this crowd, but I sure am glad you like what I do!  You made my day!
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13 posted 2001-05-28 07:25 PM


Sharon...I'm playing catchup today...don't know how I missed this beautiful and serene verse that just fills the heart and spirit with warmth...very, very lovely and uplifting.
Hugs and smiles to you, ~*~dawn~*~


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14 posted 2001-05-28 09:53 PM


Oh Martha you are too funny, the lilac that butterfly was sitting on has long gone!  Better late than never, I love your visits, thanks.
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