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HopeS
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0 posted 2001-05-19 09:18 AM



Arched Neath Pleasure

Knelt there beside me
Lips brushing my face
Gentle stroke of hands
Across the silken lace

Held closely in dreams
Long for nothing more
Tender kisses to wear
Gown falls to the floor

Arched neath pleasure
Onto the canopied bed
Scented candles aglow
Flowing desires spread

Naked passions shape
Into dreams come true
Creative juices flowing
In the closeness of you

Hope ©2001

© Copyright 2001 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
joycerogers
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1 posted 2001-05-19 09:58 AM


That, my dear, is extremely beautiful....got any mo?

O Morning...wrap yourself around me today. Let me experience the peace I see in you.

Joyce Rogers


Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-05-19 10:24 AM


A most lovely, succinct, write!  Well done....and I ditto....more, please!
VAS
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3 posted 2001-05-19 10:42 AM


tastefully sensually
HopeS
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4 posted 2001-05-19 10:43 AM


Thanks Joyce, glad you enjoyed
yes I have written over 800 , although
not all are romantic and sensual
Hope
.......................
Hey sunshine , I'm so pleased you enjoyed
reading this one
Hope

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5 posted 2001-05-19 11:55 AM


HopeS~
Very nicely done.
Passionately graceful.
~*Marge*~

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JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-05-20 06:21 AM


Nice one Hope...James
Kethry
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7 posted 2001-05-20 06:21 AM


A cusp of communion, beautifully done!
write on
Kethry.

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



Alan
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8 posted 2001-05-20 09:22 AM


Hope,,,,the more I read this the better I like it. sweet.... passionate...mildly erotic.. what a way of starting my day
thank you

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9 posted 2001-05-21 03:16 PM


This deserves to go back to the top ...

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 05-21-2001).]

Poeminister
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10 posted 2001-05-21 03:20 PM


Beautifully sensual and romantic.  Enjoyed this muchly.

Poeminister

RMW
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11 posted 2001-05-21 03:21 PM


Hope...Must agree with Interloper. Bob
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