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Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

0 posted 2001-05-23 06:01 AM

Apnay samnay apna diwaan khula rukha hay
(I have opened my poetry book in front of me)

Iss diwaan maen apnay ashaar ko ssja rukha hay
(In this book there have been decorated my verses)

Inn ashaar maen ikk diya jla rukha hay
(In these verses there has been inflamed a candle of love)

Iss diyey maen ikk donnwa sa utha rukha hay
(In this candle there has been rising a smoke)

Iss donnwann maen ikk khushboo ko mahka rukha hay
(In this smoke there has been absorbed a fragrance)

Iss khushboo maen gum k aanso ko bha rukha hay
(In this fragrance there has been flowing a tear of sorrow)

Iss aanso maen apnay mahboob ko sma rukha hay
(In this tear there has been lived my lover)

Iss mahboob maen apnay dil ko bsa rukha hay
(In this lover there has been lived my heart)

Iss dil maen muhabat ki aag ko luga rukha hay
(In this heart there has been flamed the fire of love)

Mugar iss aag ko parhai nay buja rukha hay
(But the study has been extinguished this fire)

~Wasi~

I love to nice poetry.

helen smith
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since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

1 posted 2001-05-23 06:56 AM

very cleverly written I enjoyed it

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2001-05-23 06:20 PM

Somehow I missed this. I regret missing it, but do not regret reading it now. Excellent.

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

3 posted 2001-05-23 07:49 PM

Wow, I'm glad I read this.

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

4 posted 2001-05-24 02:17 AM

Thnk you Helen , Temptress and Latin ...I love to you all.......

[This message has been edited by Waseem Cheema (edited 05-24-2001).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-05-24 06:12 AM

Very nice Waseem...James

RLS106
New Member

since 2001-03-31

Posts 7
TX, U.S. A.

6 posted 2001-05-24 12:16 PM

I like your poem very much, and the use
of the two translations. When I write I
like to use words of differnt country
and try to fit them in a verse line while
keeping meter, context, and overlaid verse
line meaning.
The best word for this is see.
.

see:sea:see:si:see:sea

.
to look
to float
to take bishops seat
to say yes
to make love
to have been in south east asia.

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