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Qumar Fatthi
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since 2001-05-20
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Pakistan

0 posted 2001-05-20 04:35 AM


Friends are cool!
They are not fool
Not even cruel
Friends are nice to me
As they should be
Friends are cool!
Friends are not bad
Not even rude
They donot hit me
They have never beat me
Friends are cool!  
My friends are best to me
They always in good mode
Not even make faces
Because they are best friends
Friends are cool!

~fatthi~


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Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16
Posts 369
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1 posted 2001-05-20 04:43 AM


Yes...... Friends are always BEST  

Welcome to piptalk....
Nice to see ur work and hope to see more in later...

Best wishes and Good luck for future.

I love to nice poetry.

[This message has been edited by Waseem Cheema (edited 05-22-2001).]

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2 posted 2001-05-22 02:02 PM


I can't imagine life without friends being there for me. *S* Welcome to Passions!
helen smith
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3 posted 2001-05-23 07:02 AM


yes Fatthi   you are right  you can trust them ..because they mean  only the very best for  you . I like being a  best friend .... I know the rssponsibility that goes with it .Your poem makes me think.
Waseem Cheema
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4 posted 2001-05-24 02:23 AM


Thanks Cheema,suthern and Helen for your nicely comments about my first poem...

Qumar Fatthi
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5 posted 2001-05-24 02:24 AM


Thanks Cheema,suthern and Helen for your nicely comments about my first poem...

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