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since 2000-04-26
Posts 113Amherst, MA, USA |
he centers himself in this stable imitation of established perfection that will never be true will he find one day as he throws it away that there is no right answer and no right way i wonder sometimes if the hill that he climbs will crumble or rise to the emptiest skies of perfection and dreams that are not what they seem or near what he wanted to be i wonder if one day one week or one year he'll stop and untie that one loose thread of fear and untangle simplicity rip perfection to shreads i wonder what will be left |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula7~ 'untie that one loose thread of fear and untangle simplicity' I enjoyed this thought ... seems so simple, yet sometimes difficult to do. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I agree with Marge... that's a superb image! *S* Very thought provoking poem... Welcome to Passions! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I enjoyed this.  Wish you would re post it in Open 14. |
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corey14 Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 89Boston, Mass, U.S.A. |
good pome keep writeing |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I like this...nice use of the language..  K |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
loved this poem of yours |
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