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RMW
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since 2001-03-21
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0 posted 2001-05-19 04:57 PM


Bon Voyage

Few women love boats;
Know the comfort
Of bundling up in winter
And stomping out through the snow,
As breath salutes with short explosions
Like a frigate approaching a fort;
Feel the warmth
Of a stark garage,
Or the latent buoyancy
Of a 15 foot sloop
As she lifts her bow
To the trailer support
Like a thoroughbred in the gate;
Feel the ache
As the buyer
Runs his palm along her gel coat
Looking for imperfections;
Dread the handshake.

RMW


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-05-19 05:26 PM


All men have, in one form or another, a mistress of their soul....

so too are some women owned by "certain material things...."

we all either dread the handshake...

or For Auction sign....

well done Bob....another keeper....

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 05-19-2001).]

Sven
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2 posted 2001-05-19 09:00 PM


indeed. . . there's not a sadder feeling than to let go of something that you love. . . even when you know that it's the right thing to do. . .

excellent Bob. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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