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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Just Sad A small part of me wonders why another part thinks that I know most of me the best of me is just sad you had to go |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Concise and powerful!!! Fantastic combination when it comes to poetry. Wish I could do that! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JLR~ I felt a tiny teardrop fall with this one. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very precise writing....brilliant work!! Nathan |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Aww... pulls upon the heartstrings, it does... lovely! ~Tier |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
succinct and sincere ... so much said...with so few perfect words... I need to learn this art of less is more... my muse rambles on and on..*S* well done poet JLR ... heal in your words. take care jm tis never easy being a moth, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed. . . this read well out loud. . . like a thought that I would have. . . great job! --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
JLR, Short and powerful. Just wonderful. TaraB |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Intense, precise, well written just sad. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
JLR-you ROCK! love it  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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