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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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0 posted 2001-05-18 06:51 PM


On a tropical night in Hawaii
Is were you will find me
I'll meet you underneath
The swaying palm trees

We'll watch the setting sun
Like pure gold it will melt
As the softness of your mouth
Upon my lips will be felt

In a hammock under the moonlight
Is where we will lie
As we search for constellations
Up above in the starlit sky

Here we'll lie for a while
As we sway to and fro
And we'll bask in the glory
Of our loves sweet afterglow

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
snowpants
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1 posted 2001-05-18 06:54 PM


'In a hammock under the moonlight
Is where we will lie
As we search for constellations
Up above in the starlit sky'

Oooh, wow...this is just the picture of a perfect night!  I've GOT to try this sometime...wonderful poem!  I love it!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

thepoeticplumber
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since 2001-05-15
Posts 185

2 posted 2001-05-18 07:38 PM


Sue, I find your poetry so very rewarding.  You have a natural talent for taking your reader with you.  Great job.  Roger TPP


Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
3 posted 2001-05-18 08:17 PM


snowpants
Thank you so much for reading this, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.......Sue

Roger
Once again thank you for your lovely words and I'm glad you enjoyed the journey....Sue

Suetang

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