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Dance into my heart....senryu

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Irie
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0 posted 05-18-2001 05:07 PM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Irie

Come, and dance with me
Underneath the moon lit skies
Forever be mine


~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"


© Copyright 2001 Sheri - All Rights Reserved
Interloper
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Deep in the heart


1 posted 05-18-2001 05:10 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

There's a whole lotta dancin' goin' on here at Passions this afternoon  

Well done.  More!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

SEA
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with you


2 posted 05-18-2001 05:10 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

a Waltz made for two
together under heaven
dancing into love




Beautiful Sheri

~SEA
Sven
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3 posted 05-18-2001 09:54 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

mind if I cut in??  

love this one Sheri. . . good to see you writing again. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lone Wolf
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4 posted 05-18-2001 10:31 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Sigh . . . so beautiful . . .    

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Janet Marie
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5 posted 05-19-2001 01:09 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

hey you  
so nice to see you posting again
and ya are light on your senryu too  
romantic syllables and sentiments
well done poetess Irie.

tis never easy being a moth,
tis not easy being the flame.
what some never see is--
sometimes ... most times ...
they are one in the same.

NapalmsConstantlyConfused
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6 posted 05-19-2001 01:48 AM       View Profile for NapalmsConstantlyConfused   Email NapalmsConstantlyConfused   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NapalmsConstantlyConfused

errrrrr this is a QUESTION more than a COMMENT, but i guess the question is kinda a comment in and of itself, no? i was wondering, since it looks like something i'd like to try, just what, exactly, are the forms / rules for a senryu poem? i'm not sure, and i don't want to go posting all over the place unless i know what the heck i'm doing....any help / comments would be appreciated, as i feel giving this a try might expand my poetic horizons a bit... sometimes working within limits can free your mind in new ways   (as we can all see from the shining examples above)
thanks
-Napalm


I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!
"Why do i smell something burning?!?"
I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!

VAS
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7 posted 05-19-2001 02:15 AM       View Profile for VAS   Email VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

That's Super!!! It would make a fantastic Valentine's Day card, don't you think?!!
Irie
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8 posted 05-19-2001 02:48 AM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Wow, I'm thrilled with all of your responses.
I didn't expect many as I have been away from PIP for so long.
Thank you all so much !    

Interloper, I think there is a lot of dancin' going on here today, hasn't there?    
More is on the way.... I hope.

SEA, I love the reply you left!    
Funny how few words can often say so much.

Sven, I don't mind at all!     It's great to be back, and great to hear from you.

LW, Thanks Hun.... How are you these days?

JM, It's always so nice to hear from you. You always make a great effort in your replies.     Many Thanks to you!

NapalmsConstantlyConfused, Check your Email. I've sent you the answer to your question! Thank you, and I hope to read one of yours soon!

VAS, I'm glad you think so! I guess it could huh?  

Again, many thanks to ALL of you!    
Bigs hugs coming your way!



~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"




[This message has been edited by Irie (edited 05-19-2001).]

JLR
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9 posted 05-19-2001 03:24 AM       View Profile for JLR   Email JLR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JLR

Dance...again and again.
Charisma
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10 posted 05-19-2001 07:40 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Great senryu, I really enjoyed this dance.

Charisma
Tiersdin
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11 posted 05-19-2001 08:01 AM       View Profile for Tiersdin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tiersdin

Beautiful!

~Tier
Sunshine
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12 posted 05-19-2001 08:19 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

trip the fantastic
light up my heart with music
splendidly you've danced
Nate Dogg
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13 posted 05-19-2001 10:58 AM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Beautiful vision, beautiful poem....peace!

Nathan

Tepok Bopar
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14 posted 05-22-2001 03:01 PM       View Profile for Tepok Bopar   Email Tepok Bopar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tepok Bopar

Be mine forever,
Beautiful moon lit dancer,
Caressing my soul.

Your poetry moves me Irie. Cheers, Tepok
Irie
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15 posted 05-23-2001 02:16 AM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

YOU ALL ARE AWESOME! Thank you, all of you, so much.  

Tepok & Sunshine, I like your reply, very nice and heart warming.


~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"


[This message has been edited by Irie (edited 05-23-2001).]

passing shadows
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precious
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