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How He Feels....................

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SEA
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You know nothing
of the valleys in my heart
what comforts me
what brings forth my smile
you call not upon
my strength
but my weakness
taking from me
what I need most
Asking of me
what you refuse to give
ignoring my tears
admonishing my needs
all the while demanding
yours be met


~SEA~


* PK inspired this....it came after reading his "This is how I feel"
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Irie
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1 posted 05-18-2001 05:01 PM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Ooh, Ouch. I'll have to go read PK post now.
I'll be back!

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"


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2 posted 05-18-2001 05:02 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Whoa!  Besides PK, where on earth did this come from?  I hope, dear SEA, this is borne on the creative imagination.

Aren't us guys so v e r y selfish?

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Irie
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Ok, I'm back.
I would say that you've done quite a job SEA.
You've touched these feelings for sure.
Excellent!  

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"


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4 posted 05-18-2001 05:05 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

This is only how his poem made me feel ......how I felt like the GUY was feeling.....NOT ME....PK is wonderful,   this was pure inspiration.....just putting how it made me feel.....from HIS point of view   that's all  
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thank you Sheri  
PoeticKnight
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Whew!...this sounded kind of negative here to me SEA...LOL
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well then I give up.....I didn't mean it negative....not towards you....sorry  
snowpants
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Nicely written, SEA...very good points, too!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

Lone Wolf
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Powerful work here, SEA.  You have illustrated your point very well!  Nice job!  

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by the grace of God.
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