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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-05-18 01:59 PM



Please.....come dance with me
in wild fields of flowers
underneath the stars

~*~

Waltz with me slowly
like the flowers bend and sway
romance me tonight

~*~

Heaven shines on us
dancing in midnight's glory
to the tune of love


~SEA~

© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-05-18 02:07 PM


beautiful, romantic images and sentimens Sea-girlie..
hope Jons got his dancing shoes shined  
Have a wonderful weekend sweets  

tis never easy being a moth,
tis not easy being the flame.
what some never see is--
sometimes ... most times ...
they are one in the same.

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with you
2 posted 2001-05-18 02:12 PM


You are the best Janet   ( tonight...he will   ) thank you  
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3 posted 2001-05-18 02:14 PM


Look at the JM....all the right stuff, at all the right moments....

your words, her photos....

this is so Pleasant!

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4 posted 2001-05-18 02:40 PM


perfect and what a beautiful picture to go with it.....

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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5 posted 2001-05-18 02:45 PM


This is so tender and compassionate.
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6 posted 2001-05-18 03:11 PM


Ahh, the perfect vision....very nice poem!!

Nathan

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7 posted 2001-05-18 03:24 PM


May I have this dance, sweet SEA?     This is pretty.  

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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8 posted 2001-05-18 03:31 PM


Isnt it amazing...the songs we can hear...when the one we so love...is holding us near....
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9 posted 2001-05-18 04:06 PM


Perfectly romantic SEA.
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10 posted 2001-05-18 04:16 PM


SEA...this is not just a lovely poem...it's a lovely portrait of your spirit. Just beautiful, as are you, with your generous heart. Thank you.  
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Deep in the heart
11 posted 2001-05-18 04:40 PM


rise and fall in waltz
a long pause in oversway
sensual movement


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 05-18-2001).]

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12 posted 2001-05-18 04:44 PM


SEA~

When lovers dance, it's beautiful.....wonderfully done...


Lauren~


***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


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13 posted 2001-05-18 06:51 PM


Yes, I will agree with everyone else...very lovely write, SEA...I really enjoyed this!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

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14 posted 2001-05-18 07:43 PM


To the tune of love says it all.  I very much enjoyed the poem.  Each word had a significant part in the wondrous flow.  Roger TPP


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15 posted 2001-05-18 11:14 PM


In midnight moonglow
let's dance in the dark meadow
We'll give stars a show



Lovely trio of Senryu.

PM



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16 posted 2001-05-18 11:17 PM


Those words are really romantic  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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17 posted 2001-05-18 11:18 PM


songs sung silent
whispering wind teases
beneath willow wands

great romantic images  
-Napalm


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I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!

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18 posted 2001-05-19 12:46 PM


SEA,

     Beautiful beautiful beautiful

TaraB

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19 posted 2001-05-19 03:30 PM


Now I want to see the movie...James
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20 posted 2001-05-20 04:37 AM


Ok. u know i am always with u dancing, Singing and .......in Poetry
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21 posted 2004-06-01 12:32 PM


nice one
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