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Dance With Me..........

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SEA
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with you


0 posted 05-18-2001 01:59 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


Please.....come dance with me
in wild fields of flowers
underneath the stars

~*~

Waltz with me slowly
like the flowers bend and sway
romance me tonight

~*~

Heaven shines on us
dancing in midnight's glory
to the tune of love


~SEA~
© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 05-18-2001 02:07 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

beautiful, romantic images and sentimens Sea-girlie..
hope Jons got his dancing shoes shined  
Have a wonderful weekend sweets  

tis never easy being a moth,
tis not easy being the flame.
what some never see is--
sometimes ... most times ...
they are one in the same.

SEA
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with you


2 posted 05-18-2001 02:12 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

You are the best Janet   ( tonight...he will   ) thank you  
Lady In White
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3 posted 05-18-2001 02:14 PM       View Profile for Lady In White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady In White

Look at the JM....all the right stuff, at all the right moments....

your words, her photos....

this is so Pleasant!
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4 posted 05-18-2001 02:40 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

perfect and what a beautiful picture to go with it.....

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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5 posted 05-18-2001 02:45 PM       View Profile for Cheryl Flemming   Email Cheryl Flemming   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cheryl Flemming

This is so tender and compassionate.
Nate Dogg
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6 posted 05-18-2001 03:11 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Ahh, the perfect vision....very nice poem!!

Nathan

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7 posted 05-18-2001 03:24 PM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste

May I have this dance, sweet SEA?     This is pretty.  

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Paula Finn
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8 posted 05-18-2001 03:31 PM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

Isnt it amazing...the songs we can hear...when the one we so love...is holding us near....
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9 posted 05-18-2001 04:06 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Perfectly romantic SEA.
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10 posted 05-18-2001 04:16 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

SEA...this is not just a lovely poem...it's a lovely portrait of your spirit. Just beautiful, as are you, with your generous heart. Thank you.  
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Deep in the heart


11 posted 05-18-2001 04:40 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

rise and fall in waltz
a long pause in oversway
sensual movement


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 05-18-2001).]

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12 posted 05-18-2001 04:44 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

SEA~

When lovers dance, it's beautiful.....wonderfully done...


Lauren~


***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

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13 posted 05-18-2001 06:51 PM       View Profile for snowpants   Email snowpants   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit snowpants's Home Page   View IP for snowpants

Yes, I will agree with everyone else...very lovely write, SEA...I really enjoyed this!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

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14 posted 05-18-2001 07:43 PM       View Profile for thepoeticplumber   Email thepoeticplumber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thepoeticplumber

To the tune of love says it all.  I very much enjoyed the poem.  Each word had a significant part in the wondrous flow.  Roger TPP

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15 posted 05-18-2001 11:14 PM       View Profile for Poeminister   Email Poeminister   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poeminister's Home Page   View IP for Poeminister

In midnight moonglow
let's dance in the dark meadow
We'll give stars a show



Lovely trio of Senryu.

PM


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16 posted 05-18-2001 11:17 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

Those words are really romantic  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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17 posted 05-18-2001 11:18 PM       View Profile for NapalmsConstantlyConfused   Email NapalmsConstantlyConfused   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NapalmsConstantlyConfused

songs sung silent
whispering wind teases
beneath willow wands

great romantic images  
-Napalm


I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!
"Why do i smell something burning?!?"
I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!

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18 posted 05-19-2001 12:46 PM       View Profile for rosepetals25   Email rosepetals25   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rosepetals25

SEA,

     Beautiful beautiful beautiful

TaraB

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19 posted 05-19-2001 03:30 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Now I want to see the movie...James
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20 posted 05-20-2001 04:37 AM       View Profile for Waseem Cheema   Email Waseem Cheema   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Waseem Cheema

Ok. u know i am always with u dancing, Singing and .......in Poetry
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21 posted 06-01-2004 12:32 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

nice one
 
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