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Paula Finn
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0 posted 05-18-2001 01:15 AM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Paula Finn

You are my poem
The words I try hard to say
The song in my soul

You are my music
The melody soft and sweet
Heartbeats keeping time

You are my silence
Words not needed between us
Just a lovers touch

You are my vision
Only the look in your eyes
Showing me your love

You are my desire
Spreading warmth with just a kiss
And your tender touch

You are all I need
With you my life is complete
And I am happy

© Copyright 2001 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
Ethan Halo
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on the roof again


1 posted 05-18-2001 04:05 AM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

how do you do that!
to say all you've said to me here, it would take me pages and hours! awesome words, but it's the things you're not saying directly that are best.... and i met a real nice girl tonight, and i felt a lot of this.... great timing!

wonderful write...you're style is still a fav  

"Many great relationships start or end in a bar.
Some of the best do both in the course of an evening."

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 05-18-2001 06:58 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Paula~
And your inkwell is filled with the ink of your heart.
LOVELY !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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rosepetals25
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3 posted 05-18-2001 07:44 AM       View Profile for rosepetals25   Email rosepetals25   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rosepetals25

Paula,

     I like this! Some much said with so little words.  I'm glad I stopped by.

TaraB

Alan
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right next door


4 posted 05-18-2001 08:47 AM       View Profile for Alan   Email Alan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alan

As a small key can open a big door.
Your small poem has said a lot
WEll done Paula
anonymous albert ?
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5 posted 05-18-2001 01:30 PM       View Profile for anonymous albert ?   Email anonymous albert ?   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymous albert ?

sweet poem...nice as well...wonderful job on the poem...i really liked...the images of love you have written here...keep writing... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"



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SEA
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with you


6 posted 05-18-2001 02:30 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

so beautifully done Paula!    SEA
Cheryl Flemming
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7 posted 05-18-2001 02:55 PM       View Profile for Cheryl Flemming   Email Cheryl Flemming   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cheryl Flemming

This is very beautiful Paula.I loved it.
Nate Dogg
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8 posted 05-18-2001 03:41 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Perfectly expressed, Paula...splendid work!

Nathan

JamesMichael
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9 posted 05-18-2001 06:01 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Paula looks like you've found the road to happiness...James
Titia Geertman
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Netherlands


10 posted 05-18-2001 08:10 PM       View Profile for Titia Geertman   Email Titia Geertman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Titia Geertman's Home Page   View IP for Titia Geertman

Good for you.

Titia     
2dalimit
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11 posted 05-18-2001 08:43 PM       View Profile for 2dalimit   Email 2dalimit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2dalimit


Youíve Senryu-ed my soul
Silently touching my heart
Expressed with Tanka

Youíre Poem and Music,
Song sung silent in your eyes,
Tender Touch and Kiss,
My Desire, Vision, Love.
Iím now complete and happy
passing shadows
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12 posted 06-01-2004 12:36 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

wow! very romantic!
 
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