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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2001-05-18 01:15 AM

You are my poem
The words I try hard to say
The song in my soul

You are my music
The melody soft and sweet
Heartbeats keeping time

You are my silence
Words not needed between us
Just a lovers touch

You are my vision
Only the look in your eyes
Showing me your love

You are my desire
Spreading warmth with just a kiss
And your tender touch

You are all I need
With you my life is complete
And I am happy

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

1 posted 2001-05-18 04:05 AM

how do you do that!
to say all you've said to me here, it would take me pages and hours! awesome words, but it's the things you're not saying directly that are best.... and i met a real nice girl tonight, and i felt a lot of this.... great timing!

wonderful write...you're style is still a fav

"Many great relationships start or end in a bar.
Some of the best do both in the course of an evening."

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-05-18 06:58 AM

Paula~
And your inkwell is filled with the ink of your heart.
LOVELY !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

3 posted 2001-05-18 07:44 AM

Paula,

I like this! Some much said with so little words.

I'm glad I stopped by.

TaraB

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

4 posted 2001-05-18 08:47 AM

As a small key can open a big door.
Your small poem has said a lot
WEll done Paula

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-05-18 01:30 PM

sweet poem...nice as well...wonderful job on the poem...i really liked...the images of love you have written here...keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-18-2001).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-05-18 02:30 PM

so beautifully done Paula!

SEA

Cheryl Flemming
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 102

7 posted 2001-05-18 02:55 PM

This is very beautiful Paula.I loved it.

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

8 posted 2001-05-18 03:41 PM

Perfectly expressed, Paula...splendid work!

Nathan

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-05-18 06:01 PM

Paula looks like you've found the road to happiness...James

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

10 posted 2001-05-18 08:10 PM

Good for you.

Titia

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

11 posted 2001-05-18 08:43 PM

You’ve Senryu-ed my soul
Silently touching my heart
Expressed with Tanka

You’re Poem and Music,
Song sung silent in your eyes,
Tender Touch and Kiss,
My Desire, Vision, Love.
I’m now complete and happy

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2004-06-01 12:36 PM

wow! very romantic!

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