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Paradox and Poets |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Paradox and Poets Stories of arrival long since told did it ever cross your mind that I stayed in many ways because of you not just in love am I blind We are the same side of opposite coins do you find that hard to bear if I’d known I was crossing a line of late I may have taken greater care For I’ve seemingly caused you some distress though that was never my desire I accept your retreat as new evidence of emotions much more dire So I’ll simply shave a bit more Crayola into this cocktail farce of life toast the gods of poetry and mix my own colors tonight [This message has been edited by JLR (edited 05-17-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
And you do mix such pretty colours babe...powerful write here girl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
here we are in rainbow fine... I'll mix with yours, if you mix with mine.... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
JLR tomorrow your color will be red full of life and confidence in your head and all that hurts will slowly start to heal from the scrapes of your heart tonight you feel helen |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JLR~ In the melancholy of this ... there is a soft beauty ~ 'So I’ll simply shave a bit more Crayola into this cocktail farce of life toast the gods of poetry and mix my own colors tonight' Very vivid imagery here. Nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you get better colors that way anyway!!  this is great. . . I love the last stanza!! ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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