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I'm Only Me
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I'm Only Me |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
Life brings forth a chance to share That free will gift, God is so fair With choices made, we fill out life Some work just great, some cause such strife We'll never please the masses all Some outright laugh, and tears may fall The human mind, is but a speck Our Maker holds the total deck We see no further than our view Internal thought, that's it, it's true Why do some think, they are so big We'll all end up, a snapped-off twig That tree of life, grows every soul Get into place, don't be so bold Well that's my view, of what I see But don't forget, I'm only me |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I thought this was wonderful and every word so true. Thank you.......Sue Suetang |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
I've often pondered when kitchen's floundered in waters oh so deep a plumber's mind when oh so kind... such matters as he'd keep and now I know why here, it shows a twig, a break, shall come but a plumber, with a poet's heart shall take it all in sum. Well done! |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
Thank you Sue for the kind comments. Thank you Decaflame for the poem. Roger |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Roger...I love the rhythm and flow of this...and the message...and I hope you go right on just being you |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
nicely written, enjoyed your poem. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Roger, After reading some of your writing in the past 2 and 3 days, I have to say I like your style. You always have a message laying within, and I love that  Good write  TaraB [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 05-18-2001).] |
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