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jwesley
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0 posted 2001-05-17 07:22 PM



The Cloth That Separates

'Tis wanton foolish thoughts
circling round and round
inside my head,
thoughts of love,
cherished dreams of such desire
but you're with him instead.
I thought if I could touch your hand,
run my fingers through your hair,
then all the sadness of unrequited love,
would fly away, just fly away,
to some other far and distant day.
Reaching out to help you from the car,
I clasped your hand tighter than I should,
praying magic would fire our love
when flesh met flesh,
you felt my heart,
and naught existed but passions war;
but lo! you wore black gloves,
and spectras dark and hideous soul
forbid the spark of flesh to flesh,
leaving wanton foolish thoughts
going round and round
inside my head.


w. james beard, jr.
© March 2001


[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 05-17-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-05-17 07:26 PM


I love this *s...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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2 posted 2001-05-17 07:26 PM


JWesley~   this is fantastic!! Saving this    SEA
HeAvEnS AnGeL
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3 posted 2001-05-17 08:01 PM


Hello!
that was a beautiful poem
im positive i was crying on the outside
and on the inside
it touched my heart  

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The Hot Girl From Canada
4 posted 2001-05-17 08:01 PM


Hello!
that was a beautiful poem
im positive i was crying on the outside
and on the inside
it touched my heart  

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The Hot Girl From Canada
5 posted 2001-05-17 08:02 PM


Beautiful  
HeAvEnS AnGeL
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6 posted 2001-05-17 08:02 PM


Beautiful  
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2001-05-17 08:04 PM


"...wanton, foolish thoughts..."

I think you could carve yet another poem off of this line itself...

a heartbreaker, indeed....

jwesley
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8 posted 2001-05-17 09:18 PM


Thanks much folks, really glad you enjoyed the read....

jwesley

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