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The Difference?

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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace


0 posted 05-17-2001 05:17 PM       View Profile for 1slick_lady   Email 1slick_lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit 1slick_lady's Home Page   View IP for 1slick_lady


The Difference?

in nothing
I ask too much of you
too much to give
I think it true
a touch of lips
true deceit
a liars game
not to repeat
lonely candle
all aglow
cold winds rush
out it goes
in this game
I feel no blame
silence screams
YOU
carry the shame
harbor no anger
it is indifference
do you know
the difference?


[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 05-17-2001).]

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 05-17-2001 05:44 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

well, one game I won't play is a "liar's game" Helen, this is moving.

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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inot2B
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2 posted 05-17-2001 05:56 PM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

I'd rather someone get mad, at least I'd know they cared.
jwesley
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Texas . . .


3 posted 05-17-2001 06:14 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Neat way of putting it my friend.

jwesley
JLR
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4 posted 05-17-2001 10:31 PM       View Profile for JLR   Email JLR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JLR

The difference, as the distance...between anger and indifference, is appreciated.  Very nicely done!
Alan
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right next door


5 posted 05-17-2001 10:39 PM       View Profile for Alan   Email Alan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alan

I don't like the game. I do like your poem
passing shadows
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