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until the ring fits . . . senryu

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Interloper
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Deep in the heart


0 posted 05-17-2001 04:16 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Interloper


the riddle circles
tighter and tighter it shrinks
until the ring fits

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-17-2001 04:17 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

I know this feeling, which is why I often feel like a square......

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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with you


2 posted 05-17-2001 07:56 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

patiently I sit
waiting until the ring fits
hoping it's from you



~SEA
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the riddle circles
tighter and tighter it shrinks
until the ring fits



puzzled from within
pieced by piece, 'til completed
mystery rings true.

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


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hopefully one day
the ring will fit  
i loved it!
HeAvEnS AnGeL
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hopefully one day
the ring will fit  
i loved it!
jwesley
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Texas . . .


6 posted 05-17-2001 08:47 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Neat poem...concept...

jwesley
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to borrow riddles
is a clue for you to find
circles of one's mind


Bravo!
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The ring will only fit
Those who are true
And deserve it!

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Paula Finn
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Tighter and tighter
Is this love or just a game
Force cant make it fit
Interloper
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Deep in the heart


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Wow, this is fun.  Thank you all for your comments and wonderful senryus!

Colleen ~ The only thing square about you is your honesty  

SEA ~ What a beautiful response.  Post it and share it with all.

Nakdthoughts ~ Wynter, what a 1derful compliment.

HA ~ Thanks for the read. Glad you enjoyed.

JW ~ Thank you my friend.

Sunshine ~ WoW!  Please post this and share it with all ... then I can respond more appropriately  

Cuddlez ~ How right you are.  Thanx for the read  

PF ~ Well done! Do share this with all.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

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Welcome back.
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good one
 
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