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When Love Finds You

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Marina
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0 posted 05-17-2001 02:03 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marina


When Love Finds You


Some say it is fate
That helps you find a mate
For that day impatiently we wait

It is a crazy game… love
Finding the one you dream of
Who fits you like a glove

To lay to rest all fears
Wipe away the lonely tears
And spend your remaining years

No more feeling blue
The world is brand new
When love, finds you


Marina May 17 2001

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley


© Copyright 2001 Marina Crossley - All Rights Reserved
Mother_Earth
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1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Mich


1 posted 05-17-2001 02:24 PM       View Profile for Mother_Earth   Email Mother_Earth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mother_Earth

Marina, this is lovely and almost makes me want to start looking!  ME
Janet Marie
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2 posted 05-17-2001 03:34 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

To lay to rest all fears
Wipe away the lonely tears
And spend your remaining years

No more feeling blue
The world is brand new
When love, finds you
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sound so simple dont it?
lovely rhymes of anticpation Marina-Girl
heres to being found  

tis never easy being a moth,
tis not easy being the flame.
what some never see is--
sometimes ... most times ...
they are one in the same.

Irish Rose
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3 posted 05-17-2001 04:06 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

only if the gloves are velvet!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Cuddlez
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4 posted 05-17-2001 04:20 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

I like you rpoem. But to me it seems a bit naive- the world is brand new when love finds you? i disagree
But i still really like the message of inspiration and hope in it..

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Interloper
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Deep in the heart


5 posted 05-17-2001 04:33 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Nope, you can't hide from love  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 05-17-2001 05:16 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Often I think about the necessity of a mutual attraction..common interests..feeling comfortable with each other..availability,
so many items come into play...James
Marina
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7 posted 05-17-2001 07:42 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Mother_ Earth, well if it almost did...then I'll just have to do better.  

Jan, thank you as usual and in the meantime...I can dream can't I!  

Kathleen, velvet gloves huh?  That maybe an Adult poem!     thanks...

Cuddlez, thanks for your comment.  I just meant that sometimes you tend to see things in a different light when your in love.  Thanks for stopping by.  

Interloper, there were truer words never spoken!  

James, as asual you are right.  So many things to look for in a person and you would think it easy to find wouldn't ya?  

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley


thecraig
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8 posted 05-22-2001 04:04 AM       View Profile for thecraig   Email thecraig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thecraig

I wait after these years I wait & your poem helps my faith.
Marina
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9 posted 05-22-2001 11:24 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

the craig, good I'm glad!  

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley


latin passion
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10 posted 05-23-2001 10:16 PM       View Profile for latin passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latin passion

What a love token you wrote. Full of hope, it was a wonderful read. This I will keep.

let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush...

passing shadows
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11 posted 06-01-2004 12:28 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

and oh the wait!
 
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