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Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

0 posted 2001-05-17 02:03 PM

When Love Finds You

Some say it is fate
That helps you find a mate
For that day impatiently we wait

It is a crazy game… love
Finding the one you dream of
Who fits you like a glove

To lay to rest all fears
Wipe away the lonely tears
And spend your remaining years

No more feeling blue
The world is brand new
When love, finds you

Marina May 17 2001

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

1 posted 2001-05-17 02:24 PM

Marina, this is lovely and almost makes me want to start looking! ME

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-05-17 03:34 PM

To lay to rest all fears
Wipe away the lonely tears
And spend your remaining years

No more feeling blue
The world is brand new
When love, finds you
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sound so simple dont it?
lovely rhymes of anticpation Marina-Girl
heres to being found

tis never easy being a moth,
tis not easy being the flame.
what some never see is--
sometimes ... most times ...
they are one in the same.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-05-17 04:06 PM

only if the gloves are velvet!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Cuddlez
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362

4 posted 2001-05-17 04:20 PM

I like you rpoem. But to me it seems a bit naive- the world is brand new when love finds you? i disagree
But i still really like the message of inspiration and hope in it..

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-05-17 04:33 PM

Nope, you can't hide from love

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-05-17 05:16 PM

Often I think about the necessity of a mutual attraction..common interests..feeling comfortable with each other..availability,
so many items come into play...James

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

7 posted 2001-05-17 07:42 PM

Mother_ Earth, well if it almost did...then I'll just have to do better.

Jan, thank you as usual and in the meantime...I can dream can't I!

Kathleen, velvet gloves huh? That maybe an Adult poem!

thanks...

Cuddlez, thanks for your comment. I just meant that sometimes you tend to see things in a different light when your in love. Thanks for stopping by.

Interloper, there were truer words never spoken!

James, as asual you are right. So many things to look for in a person and you would think it easy to find wouldn't ya?

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

thecraig
Member

since 2001-03-11

Posts 223

8 posted 2001-05-22 04:04 AM

I wait after these years I wait & your poem helps my faith.

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

9 posted 2001-05-22 11:24 AM

the craig, good I'm glad!

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

10 posted 2001-05-23 10:16 PM

What a love token you wrote. Full of hope, it was a wonderful read. This I will keep.

let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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11 posted 2004-06-01 12:28 PM

and oh the wait!

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