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Sven
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0 posted 2001-05-17 02:00 PM




*Gallery Reading Room*

seed of love
taken from
my heart

I have kept
you close
for many years

waiting to
be able to
plant you
into the ground
of another

I have searched
high and low
and have
planted you
in ground
that seemed to
be fertile
but that was
instead,
fallow and dry

my love
did not grow
in that ground
and so
I plucked you
out of there
and kept you
in the packet
of my  dreams
waiting to be
shared

and now,
seed of love
I may have
finally found
the ground that
I need to
plant you in,
the ground
of acceptance
in the garden
of life

where you will
be gently cultivated
tenderly fed
and one day
harvested for the
flowering of your
seed. . .

the
bloom
of
love

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Mother_Earth
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1 posted 2001-05-17 02:27 PM


Sven,  wow with all this love going around, someone is going to be in there deep!  Hope it is the right kind of ground this time.  Hugs,  ME
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2 posted 2001-05-17 04:25 PM


Well done!  Just keep the compost handy

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-05-17 05:05 PM


How necessary for it to be the right one or our efforts come to naught...James
JLR
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4 posted 2001-05-17 06:21 PM


Bloomin' beautiful!
jwesley
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5 posted 2001-05-17 06:24 PM


Beautiful my friend, hope it blossoms just as grand for you.

jwesley

Tough_Cookie
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6 posted 2001-05-17 06:25 PM


Oh boy, this place makes my head spin. There are so many good poets here. I like your poem sven. It's very touching.
I hope your seed flourishes.

RMW
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7 posted 2001-05-17 06:30 PM


Sven....APPLAUSE! ... and what Interloper said.  Bob
Brad Majors
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8 posted 2001-05-17 07:54 PM


bravo!!!
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9 posted 2001-05-17 07:58 PM


This is really nice.  The bloom of love, I like that.  Jyce
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10 posted 2001-05-17 08:02 PM


Fertile ground is all it takes....well done!
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11 posted 2001-05-17 08:22 PM


This is wonderful!
Sven
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12 posted 2001-05-17 09:30 PM


thank you all for your wonderful words. . . I'm glad that you enjoyed this one. . .  

plant the seeds my friends. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Suetang
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13 posted 2001-05-18 12:08 PM


Sven
I thought this was so beautifully written and I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks......Sue

Suetang

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14 posted 2001-05-18 12:08 PM


Sven~

This is very refreshing, with your touch of class and grace....beautiful...


Lauren~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


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15 posted 2001-05-18 01:11 PM


*applause*..wow this had so much beauty yet so wonderfully written...i enjoyed this greatly sven...as always...

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"



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16 posted 2001-05-20 08:34 PM


Hiya Beautiful Heart..
Your writing is tender as always.
Once planted in fertile soil and tended to by your spirit..I am sure that the bloom will be sweet and will endure all kinds of weather.

Tiersdin
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17 posted 2001-05-27 08:56 PM


Sven, this is sooo beautiful...

*smiles*

~Tier

Sven
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18 posted 2001-05-28 02:12 AM


thank you all for your wonderful words. . . I am glad that you enjoyed this. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Watersign6
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19 posted 2001-05-28 08:13 PM


Sven,my poet friend,you've done it again  
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