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Never For A Moment

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Paula Finn
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0 posted 05-17-2001 12:47 AM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Paula Finn

Never for a moment did I dream
Someone like you could love me
Eyes wide open, your heart too
You saw all I was...
...and all I could be
With your love as my light
You looked beyond what your eyes could see
To what your heart could feel
You found the woman in me
The one with so much love to give
You let me know with every word
Im all you want...all you need
In your eyes I am
Woman, lover, friend
Soulmates
Yes soulmates
Beyond tomorrow
Forever and one more day
Never for a moment did I dream
There was you

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JLR
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1 posted 05-17-2001 12:57 AM       View Profile for JLR   Email JLR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JLR

Don't you love it...when even an undream comes true?
anonymousfemale
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2 posted 05-17-2001 06:24 AM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

Very nice Paula. There was a great conveyance of emotions in here. Actually, to me it read more like a speech. By using a pause, you really amplified the dramatic influence of the piece.

Lovely work.  

~AF~

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~ Unknown ~

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3 posted 05-17-2001 07:33 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Paula~
What an affirmation of love~

'In your eyes I am
Woman, lover, friend
Soulmates
Yes soulmates
Beyond tomorrow
Forever and one more day
Never for a moment did I dream
There was you'


I REALLY believe in the here and now ...
and LOVE the thought of 'beyond tomorrow'.

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Alan
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4 posted 05-17-2001 09:03 AM       View Profile for Alan   Email Alan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alan

Paula...this is good. Everyone should know love like this. You deserve it
JamesMichael
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5 posted 05-17-2001 09:27 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"Never for a moment did I dream
there was you."
A nice surprise for you...James
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beautiful
 
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