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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-05-16 08:31 PM



Artificial Inspiremination
~*Marge Tindal*~

Sterile petri mind harboring
implantation of virgin thoughts
awaiting fertile inspire
Embryonic development
through labored effort
In the birthing room of poetry
a poem breathes


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-16 08:35 PM


Welcome to the poetry world, poem!  
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2 posted 2001-05-16 08:37 PM


Very creative, Marge!
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3 posted 2001-05-16 08:44 PM


The depth of this tiny little poem, is not to be overlooked. I have "babies" that are waiting to be hatched right now.  In reading this, I can mystically hear the heartbeat of a poem being birthed into the souls who should be blessed to get the first read.
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4 posted 2001-05-16 08:44 PM


Not in my petri dish!! I think my muse is impotent!!!    


Loved this Marge.  

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5 posted 2001-05-16 09:02 PM


Elizabeth~
Thank you !
Cigars, anyone ? ?  

Denise~
Tee-Hee !
My car muse whispered it on my drive to work this morning.
It incubated all day !

JoyceRogers~
Welcome to the laboratory at Passions !  
Thank you for enjoying this.
Now ... let's hear that it's TRIPLETS for you !

PoetdeVine~
There are only two solutions here ...
One is VIAGRA ...
and the other one would send me to ADULT !
LOL !   Thanks !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-05-16 10:08 PM


Geesh, if I had a cigar, I'd hand it over!  Imagination...that which hangs around in Margie's head?  Take a bow!
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7 posted 2001-05-16 10:11 PM


What a thought!! Only from you Marge...hee, hee...never quite looked at it that way but once wiped off (cleaned up ya know) it's really quite beautiful!

jwesley

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8 posted 2001-05-16 10:17 PM


Marge, I always heard you were a woman of culture and a real dish but this is ridiculous!!   love ya!  
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9 posted 2001-05-16 10:40 PM


Karilea~
Thank you, sweetie.

JWesley~
Glad you like.
Thanks for the reply.

Balladeer~
Nothing artificial about you !  
Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2001-05-17 01:09 AM


ROTFLMBO...good thing it wasn't a C-section, you may have given birth to an encyclopedia!  Oh my goodnesssssss!    Only in the merry muse of Marge would this birth occur!  hmmm ... I feel some inspiration coming! he he

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~
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Now dont expect me to go all goofy over this new lil 'un...geesh people get all strange over a new...aawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww now aint it just adorable? gitche gitche goo...hehehe...what a great write!!!!!and look...no diapers HAHAHAH
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I knew that any poem deserving such a title had to be a winner! LOL. This is great, Marge... congratulations on your new addition! *G*
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13 posted 2001-05-17 10:09 AM


Marge,
You sat in your car and hatched a petri dish of charm. LOL ENJOYED. Sy

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14 posted 2001-05-17 11:13 AM



    


regards to you Marge,
Sudhir

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15 posted 2001-05-17 07:49 PM


Mysteria~
Well ... maybe a volume or two of poetry !
I just can't help what the muses whisper ! LOL !

Paula~
You make me *smile* !
I thought maybe you gals would give me a Poem Shower ...
LOTS OF GIFTS ???

SuthernGal~
Why thank you, mam !

Seymour~
Thank you, love ...
I DO have a muse who rides in my car ... HONEST INJUN !

Sudhir~
*smiles* back at you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge~ I wish I could do what you do!! This is SO creative!   SEA
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SEA~
You CAN !
Just get an Acura Integra ...
They come equipped with muses !  

Thank you, sweetie !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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18 posted 2001-05-18 12:09 PM


Marge
Such a wondefully crafted piece of writing.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

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19 posted 2001-05-18 12:35 PM


Got a good chuckle on this one Marge.  The thoughts that go through your head!!  How lucky we are  
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20 posted 2001-05-18 08:23 AM


SueTang~
Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it.

Eloise~
I just love seeing you back in here.
How's about leaving us the gift of a poem ?
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge~

you are very creative....wonderful this, wonderful you....


Lauren~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


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22 posted 2001-05-18 12:55 PM


WOW!  Monoclonal poetry.  What a concept  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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23 posted 2001-05-18 06:37 PM


Very cute write, Marge...I really enjoyed this!  Quite the imagination...

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

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GreenEyes~
Well, I thank you, love.
Just a little muse whisper ...

InterLoper~
I appreciate that !

SnowPants~
An inspired whisper goes a long way.

*Glad you all enjoyed and I thank each of you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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25 posted 2001-05-18 08:56 PM


Your poetry has taken a new twist, seems to be a bit mysterious. Doing clinicals perhaps?
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26 posted 2001-05-18 09:05 PM


SongBird~
LOL !  You've got me laughing !

I'm not scheduled ... but I'll ask my muse~

*Whoops ... the results are in -
Pancreatic Poetry !  
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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