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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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Netherlands

0 posted 2001-05-16 05:36 PM


For the story behind it, see 'I feel so lost...Poem I'


I look at you
but you've disappeared
turned in upon yourself
within your thoughts

I look at you
I can still see you
but you're not there
so I will wait

I look at you
and recognize again
the man I love


[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 05-16-2001).]

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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-05-16 05:43 PM


Again, your strength pulled you through...you are apparently quite an awesome woman...

and a poet I shall be glad to come to know....

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
2 posted 2001-05-17 12:30 PM


Titia
This was so very beautiful but so tragic at the same time.  How lucky is your husband to have someone who loves him so very much.
Take care......Sue.

Suetang

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
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Missouri
3 posted 2001-05-29 08:04 PM


I bet he knows how fortunate he is to have your love.
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