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Decaflame
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0 posted 2001-05-16 05:29 PM






~*~

buckeye butterflies
winking, blinking, with big eyes
harbor spring’s delight

~*~

[This message has been edited by Decaflame (edited 05-16-2001).]

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Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-05-16 05:43 PM


Yes, so true this is.

Titia

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2 posted 2001-05-16 06:09 PM


Now that was simply beautiful!

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Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-05-17 12:26 PM


youre right...
I wouldnt have wanted to miss this.
TY lovely butterfly  

tis never easy being a moth,
tis not easy being the flame.
what some never see is--
sometimes ... most times ...
they are one in the same.

Decaflame
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4 posted 2001-05-17 12:38 PM


Titia, Mysteria, Janet Marie...

thanks for fluttering by....

thecraig
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5 posted 2001-05-17 09:18 PM


Pretty words thank you Decaflame. you brighten
Alan
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6 posted 2001-05-17 10:05 PM


Very beautiful. I could never figure out how to write one of these
Decaflame
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7 posted 2001-05-17 10:12 PM


Thank you all for your replies.  Alan....count: five syllables, seven syl., five.

I had the hardest time in the beginning doing these, now they seem like second nature....

so dare I say....try it, you'll like it?  Nah....you're not possibly old enough to remember that little lingo...

joycerogers
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since 2001-05-16
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8 posted 2001-05-18 01:57 PM


Oh how I wish I could write this type of poetry.  I bet you've been writing this kind of poetry for some years.  What a creative talent.

O Morning...wrap yourself around me today. Let me experience the peace I see in you.

Joyce Rogers


Tiersdin
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9 posted 2001-05-19 08:45 AM


I love butterflies! wonderful poem!

~Tier

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